Monday, June 14, 2010

Creativity Boot Camp: Day Nine (Melancholy "Drizzle")

Sadness steeps
Forlorn weeps
Where is my love

Lost in the greys
Deepening haze
Where is my love

Wretched water
Staining face
Oh my love

Solitary wrong
Subservient song
Gone is my love

Deserted once more
Neglected chore
Gone is my love

Dejected alone
Tomorrow unknown
Goodbye my love

1 comment:

  1. Oh, such a soulful poem. Great interpretation!

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